Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In

mordern world

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the modern world

modern world

, the idea of whether

music

exerts positive impacts on both negative and positive impacts or benefits only to people and communities has become controversial.

This

essay will discuss both views of

this

argument and a conclusion shall be made. On the one hand, it is

undeniable the fact that

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the undeniable fact that

music

has

enomous effect

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an enormous effect

enormous effect

to

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in

on

our lives. I

cite

be seated

sit

with those who support benefits of

music

may point to the emotional and

spritual

concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church

spiritual

support in one’s mood. When someone,

for instance

, listens to a song with cheerful and upbeat

tones

a succession of notes forming a distinctive sequence

tunes

on the way to work in the morning, he will probably feel more energetic and positive, helping to achieve better work performance.

Furthermore

, it is

also

true that

music

plays an important role in entertainment field

such

as films, dramas among others. Imagine that a film full of

dialouges but

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dialogues, but

dialogues but

dialogue but

without

music

may become boring, and less attractive to the audience, reducing the number of views and affecting negatively on the revenue. As a

last

point, it may have been scientifically proven that

music

helps us to tap into memory reinforcement by setting what need to be remembered to

music

,

for example

, today in some countries teachers create a history text set as the lyrics to a catchy song which may go in students’ mind better than words.

On the other hand

, negative effects of

music

should

also

be acknowledged,

for instance

, the lyrics of the

music

can be harmful and especially damage the psychology of children and teenagers at

important development stage

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the important development stage

.

Moreover

, exposure to

load

characterized by or producing sound of great volume or intensity

loud

music

or using earphones for a long time can lead to hearing loss. To conclude, it is hard to imagine a world without

music

because it appears to me that

music

has become a

apart

in part; in some degree; not wholly

part

of our spiritual life with lots positive ripple effect.

However

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However, this

this

is provided that

music

should not be listened in loud volume and for a long time.