Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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the modern world

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, the idea of whether

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exerts positive impacts on both negative and positive impacts or benefits only to people and communities has become controversial.

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argument and a conclusion shall be made. On the one hand, it is

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the undeniable fact that

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has

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our lives. I

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with those who support benefits of

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may point to the emotional and

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support in one’s mood. When someone,

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, listens to a song with cheerful and upbeat

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on the way to work in the morning, he will probably feel more energetic and positive, helping to achieve better work performance.

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, it is

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true that

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plays an important role in entertainment field

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as films, dramas among others. Imagine that a film full of

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may become boring, and less attractive to the audience, reducing the number of views and affecting negatively on the revenue. As a

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point, it may have been scientifically proven that

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helps us to tap into memory reinforcement by setting what need to be remembered to

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, today in some countries teachers create a history text set as the lyrics to a catchy song which may go in students’ mind better than words.

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, negative effects of

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should

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be acknowledged,

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, the lyrics of the

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can be harmful and especially damage the psychology of children and teenagers at

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the important development stage

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, exposure to

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or using earphones for a long time can lead to hearing loss. To conclude, it is hard to imagine a world without

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because it appears to me that

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has become a

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is provided that

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should not be listened in loud volume and for a long time.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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321 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Harmony
Melody
Rhythm
Socio-cultural
Artistic expression
Cognitive development
Soundtrack
Moral implications
Acoustic ecology
Intellectual property
Authenticity
Commercialization
Media literacy
Sensory overload
Acculturation

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