Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In
mordern world
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the modern world
modern world
, the idea of whether
music
exerts positive impacts on both negative and positive impacts or benefits only to people and communities has become controversial.
This
essay will discuss both views of
this
argument and a conclusion shall be made. On the one hand, it is
undeniable the fact that
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the undeniable fact that
music
has
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an enormous effect
enormous effect
to
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in
on
our lives. I
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be seated
sit
with those who support benefits of
music
may point to the emotional and
spritual
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
spiritual
support in one’s mood. When someone,
for instance
, listens to a song with cheerful and upbeat
tones
a succession of notes forming a distinctive sequence
tunes
on the way to work in the morning, he will probably feel more energetic and positive, helping to achieve better work performance.
Furthermore
, it is
also
true that
music
plays an important role in entertainment field
such
as films, dramas among others. Imagine that a film full of
dialouges but
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dialogues, but
dialogues but
dialogue but
without
music
may become boring, and less attractive to the audience, reducing the number of views and affecting negatively on the revenue. As a
last
point, it may have been scientifically proven that
music
helps us to tap into memory reinforcement by setting what need to be remembered to
music
,
for example
, today in some countries teachers create a history text set as the lyrics to a catchy song which may go in students’ mind better than words.
On the other hand
, negative effects of
music
should
also
be acknowledged,
for instance
, the lyrics of the
music
can be harmful and especially damage the psychology of children and teenagers at
important development stage
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the important development stage
.
Moreover
, exposure to
load
characterized by or producing sound of great volume or intensity
loud
music
or using earphones for a long time can lead to hearing loss. To conclude, it is hard to imagine a world without
music
because it appears to me that
music
has become a
apart
in part; in some degree; not wholly
part
of our spiritual life with lots positive ripple effect.
However
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However, this
this
is provided that
music
should not be listened in loud volume and for a long time.
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