The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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changed the sales in france have dramaticlly increased to reach 21 milloin euros after it was only 2,8 million in 2010 ,genrally the sales had risen in 2015 In fact in 2010 the pineapples transactions in austria were sginificantly higher than othere countires and it had jumpid to 48 million in 2015 as well the sales in france the number in 2015 was three time higher than it was in 2010 unlike other countries the number in germany and norway has decreasd in 2015 In concluation, in 2015 the sales of Fairtrade-labelled
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