Many governments think that economic progress is either mot important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have different views about the quality of a country. Though some
government
assumed the most essential achievement is economic growth, I tend to support the idea that many aspects in life Use synonyms
also
equal position.
There are no doubts that economic progress plays an important role of a nation. One of the main reasons is that in nation progress needs a strong Linking Words
finance which
could supply to create basic infrastructure Accept comma addition
finance, which
such
as schools, hospitals, transportation and accommodation. Linking Words
For instance
, almost all countries in Europe have good economy that leads to their citizens have sufficient materials for live. Meanwhile, in Africa a lot of countries in developing process are struggling to give their people opportunities to break out of hunger and poverty. As we know, the goal of many nations is providing great livelihood, excellent conditions for Linking Words
life
of people, strong economy could guarantee for people’s lives at a certain extent.
Suggestion
the life
On the other hand
, there are existing many other factors that Linking Words
government
should carefully take into account Use synonyms
besides
economic progress. In many cases, the spiritual life of people could be affected in both direct and indirect ways. Take traditional Linking Words
music
as an example, people nowadays are chasing modern Use synonyms
music
and ignoring old types Use synonyms
music
of Use synonyms
previous generation
. Suggestion
previous generations
the previous generation
a previous generation
Therefore
, Linking Words
government
should pay attention to remain other customs, culture including traditional Use synonyms
music
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, standard of lives Linking Words
also
incredibly Linking Words
important like
educational system, quality of food and habitat that could have impacts on Accept comma addition
important, like
longevity
of citizens. Suggestion
the longevity
Additionally
, if we focus too much on economic Linking Words
growth
Accept comma addition
growth, then
then
neglect other things that might be among way. Linking Words
For example
, people are exploiting natural resources in a massive scale Linking Words
such
as unlimited deforestation, hunting that Linking Words
contribute
to shorten if warning, create extreme disaster.
In conclusion, economic growth could bring Suggestion
contributes
as
a lot of benefits. The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
However
, there are many factors that Linking Words
government
should consider before taking action.
Use synonyms
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