Many governments think that economic progress is either mot important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different views about the quality of a country. Though some
government
assumed the most essential achievement is economic growth, I tend to support the idea that many aspects in life
also
equal position. There are no doubts that economic progress plays an important role of a nation. One of the main reasons is that in nation progress needs a strong
finance which
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finance, which
could supply to create basic infrastructure
such
as schools, hospitals, transportation and accommodation.
For instance
, almost all countries in Europe have good economy that leads to their citizens have sufficient materials for live. Meanwhile, in Africa a lot of countries in developing process are struggling to give their people opportunities to break out of hunger and poverty. As we know, the goal of many nations is providing great livelihood, excellent conditions for
life
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the life
of people, strong economy could guarantee for people’s lives at a certain extent.
On the other hand
, there are existing many other factors that
government
should carefully take into account
besides
economic progress. In many cases, the spiritual life of people could be affected in both direct and indirect ways. Take traditional
music
as an example, people nowadays are chasing modern
music
and ignoring old types
music
of
previous generation
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previous generations
the previous generation
a previous generation
.
Therefore
,
government
should pay attention to remain other customs, culture including traditional
music
.
Furthermore
, standard of lives
also
incredibly
important like
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important, like
educational system, quality of food and habitat that could have impacts on
longevity
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the longevity
of citizens.
Additionally
, if we focus too much on economic
growth
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growth, then
then
neglect other things that might be among way.
For example
, people are exploiting natural resources in a massive scale
such
as unlimited deforestation, hunting that
contribute
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contributes
to shorten if warning, create extreme disaster. In conclusion, economic growth could bring
as
The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
a lot of benefits.
However
, there are many factors that
government
should consider before taking action.

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