It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. (Discuss both these views and give your opinion).

Some people think that children are born with talents able to be professionals, while
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
groups assumed kids with no talents
also
survive as
profesionals
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
professional
professions
. The arguments both for and against children become
profesionals
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
professional
with talents will be discussed in
this
essay. Children who born with gifts are benefits for them. They can become good musician or athlete without work hard.
For example
, Mozart was a child with
special gift
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special gifts
a special gift
, he composed music since he was 5 years old. He had composed 500s musics in his entire life. He becomes a role model of another pianist in the world until now.
Nevertheless
.
there
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There
are some arguments against
born
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bears
bearing
talents. Parents can not choose their children have born talents, but every child has
passion
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a passion
. Parents able to advise and support their
chlidren
a young person of either sex
children
at something they like most.
For instance
, Master Chef Kids participants have passion
at
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in
of
for
cooking. Their parents support them with taught about cooking, enrolled in cooking courses and guided them to join a survival show.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, those processes will make them
work harder become
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work harder to become
professional chef
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a professional chef
professional chefs
. In conclusion, I personally believe it children with certain talents are easier to be
professional
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more professional
than children without certain talents, but work harder never lie and will make them more capable in the future.
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