'Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.' To what extent to you agree or disagree with the statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Many argue that participating in video games is considered to be a loss of valuable time,
therefore
, it should be forbidden for kids to play them. I fully believe children should be banned from playing Linking Words
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essay will; Linking Words
firstly
, examine how the continuous use of these games is detrimental to a child’s optical health, Linking Words
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, discuss how their content may negatively impact children’s fragile minds.
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To begin
with, boys and girls should not play Linking Words
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games as they have a harmful effect on their eyes. Use synonyms
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is because, hours per day are spent fixated on a laptop screen playing these games, Linking Words
consequently
, putting a strain on eyes and reducing their optical capacity. Linking Words
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can be exemplified by countless medical Linking Words
studies like
the Childs Optical Health Society Research, which concluded that 50% of children who wear glasses spend at least one hour a day playing Accept comma addition
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this
may result in grave consequences Linking Words
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as, the child may require glasses.
Another point is, Linking Words
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games have an extremely negative influence on kids mentality. Use synonyms
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is due to the fact that these games may contain inappropriate language, harmful imagery and concepts. Linking Words
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, leading to aggressive behaviour and thoughts. Linking Words
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in 2018. Owing to the fragile nature of young minds, they may easily be swayed and influenced by these games.
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although
there is much debate surrounding the topic of the youth and Linking Words
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games, undoubtedly it is Use synonyms
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unfavourable trend as it reduces optical health and promotes violence in some instances. In Suggestion
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future
, I hope video games are unavailable by law for children under 18.Suggestion
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