In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work?

Some European schools impart practical skills to young students from the age of 11 or 13, with the aim of training them to secure employment in the future.
However
, a general academic curriculum
also
exists for the rest of the students who attend school for a more traditional learning. In my opinion, schools should combine academic education with practical skill learning through awareness workshops,
career
assessment tests and
summer
internship
programmes, in order to prepare the students for the world of work.
Firstly
, a
career
assessment test should be conducted for the students wherein certain professions would be suggested based on their current abilities and aptitudes.
As a result
of which, awareness workshops highlighting a wide of range of professions (especially the jobs which the students may have matched with) should be organised by the schools. These workshops can
then
provide the students with an insight on how life would be if they choose a certain
career
path and the route to get there. A
career
assessment test proved of great help to me during my schooling as it revealed the best professional match (of an editor) with my existing skills and interests (reading and writing).
Secondly
, the schools should coordinate with companies or individual professionals to organise
summer
internship
programmes for their students. These internships will not only serve as a platform that will develop the student’s practical skill sets, but
also
give them an opportunity to witness life in a certain professional field. Another benefit is that
this
programme will not interfere with the general academic education as it will take place during the
summer
vacation. During my younger years, my
summer
internship
(back in 2011) with a publishing company had greatly helped me in making my decision towards pursuing higher education in the English language, in order to fulfil my dream of becoming an editor. To conclude, I do believe that schools should indeed prepare students for the world of work but not in isolation.
Instead
, they should impart a combination of academic learning with practical skill training in order to achieve a more holistic development of the student, through workshops, tests and
internship
opportunities.

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