Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Children
become
talent citizens
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talent, citizens
for society are deemed different point of views. Personally, the educating for children always requires
close combination
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a close combination
the close combination
of the school and family because children need to develop their personality
comprehensively
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comprehension
.
To begin
with, what holds the most importance is that parents have obligations and responsibilities to their children as the family is where children are born, grow up and form their personality so that the impact of family
education
on children is
first
and earliest.
For instance
, children enjoying family party with relatives would will learn how to treat beloved people as well as respect family value.
Furthermore
, building
a
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an
appropriate lifestyle to promote the positive aspects of children is extremely vital. Because adults keep
exemplary role
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an exemplary role
in
family
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the family
and society as well as mentor children involving a lot of complex social relationships.
In addition
, the school has the main function of training specific knowledge for children thanks to
teachers
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the teachers
. Specifically, children are improved IQ and EQ by the comprehensive
education
journey from primary to higher system. What is more, physical
education
program helps them grow up health and social skills, leading to generate convenient condition for improving their brain mindset. To illustrate, research results of American scientists said that exercise helps children have not only a healthy
body but
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body, but
also
better child's brain, especially in acquiring information and memory ability To sum up, every
children
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child
need
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needs
total
education
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of
for
both parents and school for entirely
development
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developmentally
. Building talent young generation should be invested precisely for the purpose of nationwide sustainable development in the future.
Submitted by The expense of living is higher in developed nations and it affects directly to citizens and society. In this essay, I will express this issue and some resolves. People living in the US or any European country would face daily expensive cost and it affects directly to every citizen and society. Firstly, It forces adult individuals to work in most of the time and takes away enjoyable moments in their lives. For instance, a direct salesman in car dealers usually conducts their tasks from 6 am to 8 pm to maximum volume of sales and meet daily costs. Secondly, this fact creates a bunch of homeless people, who come from both white-collar and blue-collar workers. In Silicon Valley, teachers, bankers or staffs of governments live in track, which is normal images that local people see every day. The best way is that governments and corporation must act together. In the US, authorities in some province encourage real estate companies to build more houses and apartments, they act to remove and shrink terms, conditions in certain sectors. Some also decrease business tax massively to attract large conglomerate. It results in thousands of apartments, house, which appear at the edge of cities or state. Let’s take Google corporation is an example, they proactively associated with state government and sponsor to provide low-cost houses in Silicon Valley for their employees and valley citizens. High cost in developed countries and other issues always happens in different contexts, hence individuals, corporation, and authorities must act and take their responsibility in life and our society. on

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