Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Children
become
talent citizens
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talent, citizens
for society are deemed different point of views. Personally, the educating for children always requires
close combination
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a close combination
the close combination
of the school and family because children need to develop their personality
comprehensively
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comprehension
.
To begin
with, what holds the most importance is that parents have obligations and responsibilities to their children as the family is where children are born, grow up and form their personality so that the impact of family
education
on children is
first
and earliest.
For instance
, children enjoying family party with relatives would will learn how to treat beloved people as well as respect family value.
Furthermore
, building
a
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an
appropriate lifestyle to promote the positive aspects of children is extremely vital. Because adults keep
exemplary role
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an exemplary role
in
family
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the family
and society as well as mentor children involving a lot of complex social relationships.
In addition
, the school has the main function of training specific knowledge for children thanks to
teachers
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the teachers
. Specifically, children are improved IQ and EQ by the comprehensive
education
journey from primary to higher system. What is more, physical
education
program helps them grow up health and social skills, leading to generate convenient condition for improving their brain mindset. To illustrate, research results of American scientists said that exercise helps children have not only a healthy
body but
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body, but
also
better child's brain, especially in acquiring information and memory ability To sum up, every
children
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child
need
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needs
total
education
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of
for
both parents and school for entirely
development
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developmentally
. Building talent young generation should be invested precisely for the purpose of nationwide sustainable development in the future.
Submitted by Thanh on

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