Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artist including painters, musicians and poets. However, other people think that this is a waste of money discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
21st century, people are very much interested in enhancing skill and spending good time on different arts
such
as music, painting and being romantic with their partner with an old poem. While a group of supporter asking
government
to encourage
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special skilled people
a special skilled person
special skilled persons
the special skilled person
special skilled person
by providing them several benefits, another group is opposing the same thing and stating that it is worthless to spend money on it.
This
debate is a hot potato these days in the market. If we look at one side, the crowd of people who are against in dividing financial substitute, they might be arguing that provided
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funding
funds
fund
should be allocated to the top most necessary things to mankind
such
as medical, food, and
water
crises. In the developing and poor country people are facing issues
such
as
water
pollution, hunger, low medical facilities. To come up from
this
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issue, it
issue it
requires more investment in these areas.
For example
, in India, at the rural area, people are still facing problem of clean
water
. The
government
should focus on basic things
first
and should increase necessary structure.
For instance
,
water
purification plant.
However
, at the
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
side, the different arts
such
as painting helps people to enhance their creativity in their personal life. Making different arts and their role model popular, and providing them special benefits can increase interest in people’s life.
For instance
, in the United States of America, auction of painting happening frequently by
government
and the painting is getting sold in
crores
of dollars which can increase revenue of personal and
government
. In conclusion, in my opinion, the debate of allocating budget by
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the government
government
for the artist could be beneficial to the society or not? The consideration should be made after looking
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at
on
the priority of the particular country’s economy.

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