New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many parts of the world. It is not uncommon to see the way young generation shifting their leisure time from outdoor to indoor activities due to the

inteference

a policy of intervening in the affairs of other countries

interference

indifference

of high-tech advancement. While it is true that there are certain benefits regarding

this

tendency, I am convicted that the consequences overwhelming its positive aspects. Thanks to the advent of technology and the internet, schoolers numerous could render many beneficial applications. In more details, a wide range of games, which carry educational aspects,

are entered

Suggestion

is entered

in order to serve the youngster.

Therefore

,

this

not only help children release stress from intensive study, but

also

broaden their horizons within valuable knowledge. Turing to alternative side,

this

inclination exerts various detrimental impacts on teenagers. The

first

drawback would be that the under-18s can be easily engrossed in their private devices, which may distract them from studying.

As a result

, students might fall behind their study, causing the decline in academic performance. Another shortcoming stems would be that as children are addicted to the Internet, they would allocate more time to sit behind the screen rather than going out.

This

, thence, deprives adolescents of their opportunities to socialize

,

Accept space

,

which makes them becomes more prone to passive-lifestyle diseases

such

as obesity and heart illnesses. In the long run,

this

action may negatively affect on their adulthood. To recapitulate, albeit youngsters can obtain a host of merits from the Internet, they must avoid themselves from addicting to it.

Hence

, I

concut

be in accord; be in agreement

concur

with the notion that

this

attitude

vrings

take something or somebody with oneself somewhere

brings

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more downsides to teenagers’ well-being as

welll

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

well

as study concentration.