Learning English at school is often seen as important than learning locak languages . If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion , is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we ry to ensure the survival of locak languages and , if so, how?

In our twenty-
one
century
Suggestion
,
,
English is considered the most
Suggestion
languages
language
used internationally between people
Suggestion
;
;
In fact
Suggestion
,
,
According to
Suggestion
Wikipedia
wikipedia
Suggestion
,
,
More than 60% of the people around the world speak English as a
first
language
or
second
language
Suggestion
.
.
English
Suggestion
,
,
also
, used in all
Suggestion
institutions
institutional
instituation
and
Suggestion
universities
universites
around the world in books
Suggestion
,
,
researches
Suggestion
,
,
and studies. English helps people to gain knowledge
Suggestion
,
,
know more about cultures
Suggestion
,
,
and - may
one
day - union people to speak
one
language
Suggestion
.
.
Furthermore
Suggestion
,
,
many students seek to study in English countries
Suggestion
,
,
like
Suggestion
Canada
Canda
or Australia, . For these reasons, It's very important to start learning English for students from their
first
grades
Suggestion
.
.
On
Suggestion
the other hand
other hand
Suggestion
,
,
Learning
Suggestion
the local language
local
language
is important
Suggestion
.
.
With learning
Suggestion
the local language
local languages
local
language
Suggestion
,
,
one
can know more about the history and traditions of his country. Most of companies and
Suggestion
institutions
institution
instituations
of
one
's country will require fluency of
Suggestion
the local language
local language
local langauge
.
However
Suggestion
,
,
Many schools
Suggestion
,
,
especially International schools, leave out the local
language
and focus on English
language
. Many of
Suggestion
the students
students
of these schools struggle in speaking their local
language
Suggestion
.
.
In the near future
Suggestion
,
,
when most of generations can hardly speak English
Suggestion
,
,
this
local
language
can die and considered from endangered
language
Suggestion
.
.
To solve
this
problem
Suggestion
,
,
In my opinion, governments have to make their local
language
as
Suggestion
an obligatory subject
obligatory subject
obligantory subject
in all schools. Media and T.V shows should raise
Suggestion
awareness
awarness
of learning local
language
. In my opinion
Suggestion
,
,
learning local
language
is as important as learning English
Suggestion
.
.
Each of them supports
Suggestion
the goal
goal
in person's life.
Suggestion
We
we
should focus on how to develop both of them.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users