Learning English at school is often seen as important than learning locak languages . If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion , is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we ry to ensure the survival of locak languages and , if so, how?

In our twenty-
one
century
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English is considered the most
language
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languages
used internationally between people
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In fact
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According to
wikipedia
a web-based encyclopedia with content contributed by volunteers; most articles can be edited by anyone
Wikipedia
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More than 60% of the people around the world speak English as a
first
language
or
second
language
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English
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also
, used in all
instituation
an organization founded and united for a specific purpose
institutions
institutional
and
universites
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
around the world in books
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researches
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and studies. English helps people to gain knowledge
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know more about cultures
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and - may
one
day - union people to speak
one
language
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Furthermore
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many students seek to study in English countries
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like
Canda
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
or Australia, . For these reasons, It's very important to start learning English for students from their
first
grades
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On
other hand
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the other hand
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Learning
local
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the local language
language
is important
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With learning
local
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the local language
local languages
language
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,
one
can know more about the history and traditions of his country. Most of companies and
instituations
an organization founded and united for a specific purpose
institutions
institution
of
one
's country will require fluency of
local langauge
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the local language
local language
.
However
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Many schools
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especially International schools, leave out the local
language
and focus on English
language
. Many of
students
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the students
of these schools struggle in speaking their local
language
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In the near future
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when most of generations can hardly speak English
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this
local
language
can die and considered from endangered
language
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To solve
this
problem
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In my opinion, governments have to make their local
language
as
obligantory subject
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an obligatory subject
obligatory subject
in all schools. Media and T.V shows should raise
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
of learning local
language
. In my opinion
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learning local
language
is as important as learning English
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Each of them supports
goal
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the goal
in person's life.
we
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We
should focus on how to develop both of them.

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