In recent times, many people are making decision to live alone. Does it have positive or negative on society?

Some people
on
Suggestion
in
society modern are deciding to live alone.
This
essay will try to identify the issues of living alone and
also
explain the effects of the issues on society. One could think of various reasons why many people make
decision
Suggestion
the decision
decisions
a decision
to live with no one.
First
and foremost, career is more important for them, they are more focus to reach their dreams if they are living alone.
Consequently
, they do not want to
married
Suggestion
marry
anyone. Those people do not want to make family and spend
time mostly
Accept comma addition
time, mostly
alone, that make their temper unstable.
However
, they are wondering work is happier if they do not have anyone to take care and could more focus on
job
Suggestion
the job
jobs
. Somehow, it
make
Suggestion
makes
them get
stress
Suggestion
stressed
easily and bad temper. People could not live alone. They should have to socialize on society. People who live alone have fluctuate emotion and more sensitive. They need to release stress with talk other people or they become feel anxious, sick both
mentality
Suggestion
mentally
and physically.
In addition
, they could not work properly and harm
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people around them. To conclude, I think
unconstant
likely to change frequently often without apparent or cogent reason; variable
inconstant
temper of people who live alone
has
Suggestion
have
been caused by being company servants as well as changes in social problems and turn could lead to problems to expand social circle.

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