The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the driving crimes should be managed strictly is the only solution to keep

the safe

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safer

the safest

on the

road

and reduce the accidents

.

Accept space

.

Personall

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Personally

Personal

Personnel

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

disagree with

this

statement because it has more than one to make safely on the

road

. One of the

reamarkable

unusual or striking

remarkable

that people should know that the accidents don'

t

just only from

offerces

of riding, it

also

depends on the other factors.

In particular

, weather condition contributed significantly to have

negative imfact

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a negative impact

negative impact

while the transport facilities

also

caused many terrible accidents.

For example

, it is difficult to take part in the

traffic

of the place,

such

as Sapa where fog covers everyday and the

road

is around the mountain, because of the complex movement,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

in the

rain

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rainy

day.

In addition

, there are more and more vehicles in the world and the

road

isn'

t

still expanded, so a huge number of

traffic

jam become common and

consllitions

the act of cancelling; calling off some arrangement

cancellations

coalitions

between transport is more. Therefor, to improve

road

safely, people should pay more attention to find out the reasons what

make

Suggestion

makes

the

roas

an open way (generally public) for travel or transportation

road

rash

rose

isn'

t

safe. The main reason that can make more accidents is from aware and responsibilities of each other

people

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person

. In specific, if the governments are able to ban the policies or manage

stricly

restricted to something

strictly

with the

unlaw

actions of driving, but the citizens don'

t

follow these, the figures of

consllitions

of

traffic

still rise.

Futhermore

in addition

Furthermore

, from people's

aware

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awareness

,

accommulating

get or gather together

accumulating

the knowledge on

traffic

is necessary in the modern world because they need to know about the laws and carry out these to save

themselve

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

and develop their country.

For instance

, people when join in the

traffic

don'

t

break the law means that the number of polices

also

recline and governments can focus on developing their country with the best way. In conclusion, for these reasons

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

have mention

above i

Accept comma addition

above, I

above I

think that, it is more and more ways to keep

the safe

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safer

the safest

on the

road

with the right actions of the government and

individual

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individuals

the individual

, in the future, the accident or

consllitions

will fall suddenly.