Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas (through words, pictures, music or films). However, some people think the government should impose certain restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts is increasingly becoming an indispensable part in our current lives. While some people advocate the idea of free expression of artists, some regulations are allegedly taken into account to control the artistic creators. From my own perspectives, I do believe that they should be given rights to disclose their own messages under state legislations. On the one hand, regardless of democratic regime the artists are living in, potentially detrimental consequences might be derived from reckless art works.
Firstly
, emotionally vulnerable teenagers are likely to be susceptible to brutal and pornographic contents on the Internet websites they surf.
Although
the images might be judged to be valuable creative works, they are not controlled to keep distance from children, who probably imitate the sensitive things.
Secondly
, when it comes to
religious aspect
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the religious aspect
, sarcastic pictures about revered religious leaders could result in bloody revenges of followers.
For example
, an act of head-cut was carried out by Iraq terrorists as a violent reaction to
USA's raids
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the USA's raids
in the country.
As a result
, the
art works
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artworks
should be sternly controlled by a
cultural governmental
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cultural, governmental
institution so as to reduce the potential risks.
Furthermore
, either art works or artists themselves should be placed into legislative rules. Artists are well-known influencing persons, whose
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behaviours
, attitudes and manners always draw public attention. It is taken for granted that the moral actions of celebrities have
positive impact
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a positive impact
on their fans and vice versa. Take Justine Bieber
for example
, his insulting words to others as well as his addiction to drug did not only ruin his singer
career but
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career, but
also
make a negative mimic to his avid fans generally and adolescence particularly. In conclusion, how extraordinarily creative the artists are, their messages to
public
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the public
should be still thoroughly controlled by the parliament's regulations. Government plays a key role in successful debuts of talented creators as well as quality management of
launched
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launching
artistic products.
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