Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people
thinh
judge or regard; look upon; judge
think
thing
studyin
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
student
is the most important agenda for full-
time
university
while others convince that it is important for them to involve in other activities. There is no fully right or wrong for each party,
necause
for the reason that; on account of
because
in some extents, full-
time
university
have
Suggestion
has
different priorities to develop during their
time
investment as students. Full-
time
university
requires students studying different subjects that support for their career path after
university
. Students need to invest their
time
not only in
theory but
Accept comma addition
theory, but
also
search updated information
pf
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
advanced knowledge and techniques to improve their capability to become a real skilled-worker or managers in practice. So, they need to spend most of their
time
to focusing on learning, studying
,
Accept space
,
practicing and connecting their network in the
univeristy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
time
to improve themselves and explore
tehir
of them or themselves
their
opportunities in the future. Sometimes, students
also
need to discover something new that others can apply their discovery and invention to their study and job. An excellent full-
time
university
also need
Suggestion
also needs
the highest scores at
university
Suggestion
the university
to receive scholarship, career opportunities or post graduation
progrem
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
program
programs
to a higher level professional academy as Master, MBA, Doctor,
pHD
Suggestion
PhD
pad
pH
level,
specificially
Suggestion
specific
specifically
to their subject.
On the other hand
, some people express their opinion that full-
time
university
is just a medium step to prepare for their real
life
after studying. So, in the
meantme
the time between one event, process, or period and another
meantime
of learning in
university
, student should
also
prepare their social knowledge,
life
skill to expand their relationship, extend their ability to involve in different categories as
econimic
Suggestion
economics
economic
economy
economies
, politics, social and technical to contribute to the bigger picture of their
life
. So it is
also
beneficial for them to learn not only in
university
, but
also
in real
life
by involving in other activities that support them easily to adapt full
life
after graduation. Both parties have some extents to
agreee
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
, each of
fulltime student need
Suggestion
the full-time student need
full-time student need
full time student need
to divide their objective with their own situation in short-term and long-term success.

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