In some countries people think women should have equality with men, in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the Army. Others think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Gender equality in the modern professional world is still a debatable issue. In some nations, some people advocate that both sexes can work in all professions, whereas, others believe that some jobs, namely police and army services, should only recruit males. In

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of all, many people believe that women who are not being treated the same way with the male counterparts is inevitably against the egalitarian thinking. Women and men should be given the same opportunities and chances irrespective of their sex chromosomes. All women should have the right to get a position in any

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, employers demand self-disciplined, dedicated and ambitious workers in their businesses.

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has nothing with the gender of the employee. It is known by many that sex is not important when dealing with important tasks. Take Apple Company as a prime example, where the high-level CEOs are almost half women and half men. The company believes that all hard-working people regardless of their genders could have the same success if treated equally.

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, it is thought by some that women are not fit enough for some particular jobs. They believe that physical appearance and strength are crucial to getting a job done. Women tend to have less muscle strength by nature, so that makes them unsuitable for some professions. What's more, traditional mothers have been told for years to stay at home and raise up their children. A significant number of people are of the opinion that mothers do these tasks better than fathers and support the idea that women should not work in highly-demanded and challenging jobs, but nurture their homes and their beloved children.

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, many mothers in Cyprus, who are seeking jobs, are reluctant to work in the Army service owing to its physical exhaustion and long-lasting working hours. To conclude, in my opinion,

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being physically weaker and having more responsibilities to look after their children, women's job offers should not be limited since

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as well. Everyone should be treated equally and given the same chances of job offers in any field.