In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many men and women are opting to live separate than ever before in a few countries. It is a positive trend because they can become good
decision
makers and learn crucial
life
skills. People are more likely to become good
decision
makers by living independently.
This
is because in joint families, most of
decisions
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the decisions
are made by
head
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the head
heads
of families, so a person
can not
can not
cannot
enhance his experience to make important decisions.
In contrast
, when people live alone, they have to make all big or small decisions themselves because of no interference in their
life
. By making decisions about their work, they tend to get expertise in
this
skill which proves a boon in their future.
For example
, a survey showed that 80% of those, who live alone, choose their career very carefully than those who live with family because the former are well-versed with
decision
making skills and its consequences. By living alone, they can get experience of many important
life
skills.
That is
to say that when people reside alone, they have to do all household chores themselves,
such
as cleaning, cooking and washing clothes. These works
educate
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to educate
them all these skills.
As a result
, they become
self-reliant which
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self-reliant, which
may be beneficial in their daily routine.
For example
, a recent survey revealed that 80% of overseas students admitted that they are well-versed with common household works because they do these works on
daily basis
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a daily basis
. To conclude, living alone is becoming popular among people in a few nations.
This
is a positive phenomenon because it makes people
good
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better
decision
makers and teaches them essential
life
skills.
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