A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that, animals are

very important part

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a very important part

of our ecosystem. Few people believe that it is natural to use animals for one’s own

benefit

, while others argue that it is a form of abuse. In

this

essay, I will discuss points on both sides of the argument and provide my support to the former view. From

times

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time

immemorial, human beings have been depending on animals. There is no doubt that we derive great

benefit

from animal products like milk, medicines, nutritious food. Not only in terms products, but

also

animals are widely used for transportation and agriculture. I think it is impossible to imagine our lives without the need to depend on animals.

For instance

, there is no true supplement for animal milk in terms of nutritional value. As mentioned earlier, they form an important part of our ecosystem, and to me our ecosystems are designed in a living way beings

benefit

from one another and

co-exist

coexist peacefully, as of nations

coexist

in harmony. Now that we have looked into why it is impossible for us to imagine life without benefiting from animals.

In contrast

, there are a lot of people who are of the opinion that humans should refrain from exploiting animals. In my view,

that is

true to an extent, humans should not hunt or kill animals for pleasure;

also

they should not mistreat animals by creating a hostile living environment for them. These actions, in

long term

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the long term

will harm mankind, because these animals that are being killed for pleasure become

extinct which

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extinct, which

will in turn result in

unbalanced ecosystem

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an unbalanced ecosystem

that’s dangerous. It is important for humans to note that they cannot exist without deriving benefits from animals, and it is

there

of them or themselves

their

responsibility to ensure animal welfare. In conclusion, it is evident that humans cannot exist without deriving benefits from

animals

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animals, therefore

therefore

I support the concept of depending on animals for our

benefit

, but as discussed earlier

this

needs to be carried out without subjecting animals to exploitation.