A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that, animals are
a very important part
very important part
of our ecosystem. Few people believe that it is natural to use animals for one’s own
, while others argue that it is a form of abuse. In
essay, I will discuss points on both sides of the argument and provide my support to the former view. From
immemorial, human beings have been depending on animals. There is no doubt that we derive great
from animal products like milk, medicines, nutritious food. Not only in terms products, but
animals are widely used for transportation and agriculture. I think it is impossible to imagine our lives without the need to depend on animals.
For instance
, there is no true supplement for animal milk in terms of nutritional value. As mentioned earlier, they form an important part of our ecosystem, and to me our ecosystems are designed in a living way beings
from one another and
coexist peacefully, as of nations
in harmony. Now that we have looked into why it is impossible for us to imagine life without benefiting from animals.
In contrast
, there are a lot of people who are of the opinion that humans should refrain from exploiting animals. In my view,
that is
true to an extent, humans should not hunt or kill animals for pleasure;
they should not mistreat animals by creating a hostile living environment for them. These actions, in
the long term
long term
will harm mankind, because these animals that are being killed for pleasure become
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extinct, which
extinct which
will in turn result in
an unbalanced ecosystem
unbalanced ecosystem
that’s dangerous. It is important for humans to note that they cannot exist without deriving benefits from animals, and it is
of them or themselves
responsibility to ensure animal welfare. In conclusion, it is evident that humans cannot exist without deriving benefits from
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animals, therefore
I support the concept of depending on animals for our
, but as discussed earlier
needs to be carried out without subjecting animals to exploitation.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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