Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Some people suggest that the circumstances of a crime and the reason for committing it should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Every type of
crime
should have a fixed
punishment
, which is a common approach in society,
as a result
,
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,
it will save time and money. While deciding on the
punishment
one should consider the reason behind that
crime
; circumstances can
also
be in consideration. Both the views needed to be discussed in
this
essay. For more significant crimes mandatory
punishment
has the advantage that people are aware of the potential consequences of committing a
crime
; everyone will receive same
punishment
for
same
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the same crime
crime
.
This
will save time and money
;
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;
suitable for minor offences
such
as jumping
red light
Suggestion
red lights
a red light
,
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,
speeding and not wearing a helmet that attracts standard fines.
Furthermore
a lighter sentence is fair for
young person
Suggestion
a young person
young people
the young person
who has committed a
crime
, in order to give them the opportunity to become a law abiding citizen.
Moreover
, a part of society
think
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thinks
, would it be
better option
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a better option
to consider
circumstances
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the circumstances
while deciding on the punishments
,
Accept space
,
because many times people commit
crime
in order to prevent suffering
.
Accept space
.
It will reduce pressure and burden of the judges as situations are adverse in some cases.
For example
, someone who murders in order to prevent suffering is morally different to the person who murders a
strange
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stranger
at random. In summary, fixed
punishment
is suitable
for minor offence
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for a minor offence
.
Furthermore
, situations of committing
crime
should be in consideration while fixing for sentences; according to me
history
Suggestion
the history
of a person and opportunity of rehabilitation
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
should
also
be in mind before giving them
punishment
.
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