You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer. You should write at least 250 words

The studying overseas is a great and exciting experience. It is not only because they offer courses which your
home
country
couldn’t but
also
gives you
chance
Suggestion
the chance
a chance
to meet new people, culture and maybe making new friends.
Personally I
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Personally, I
love studying abroad because of cultural exchange. Most people disagree say that it is hard to adapt to
new place
Suggestion
a new place
and there is another thing called “cultural shock” which means people who come from abroad find it hard to understand
new culture
Suggestion
the new culture
new cultures
because it is not the culture they used to have back at
home
country
. I agree with that
it
it is
it's
hard to get
use
Suggestion
used
to
new place
Suggestion
the new place
a new place
new places
not only in studying. But I am sure that after a while people get used to
new place
Suggestion
the new place
a new place
new places
. Studying in your
home
country
is good too. It depends on
person’s preferences
Suggestion
the person’s preferences
a person’s preferences
.
For
example some
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example, some
people like me prefer studying overseas or some couldn’t find course that they wanted
attend in their
Suggestion
to attend their home
to attend in their home
home
country
and other like to
study
where they live. But maybe there are other reasons too.
Personally I
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Personally, I
disagree with
opinion
Suggestion
an opinion
the opinion
that says studying in your
home
country
better than studying abroad. Because when you
study
abroad you
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abroad, you
not only
study
your subject you learn to adapt to
new situation
Suggestion
new situations
the new situation
which makes it easier for you to adapt to new changes. In conclusion, as I said, it depends on
person
Suggestion
the person
. Because some people who live in developed countries goes to
study
in less developed
country
.
This
shows that it is not always environment that makes people to
study
home
or overseas.
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