The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world's cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport. You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Air pollution is one of the most discussed
issue
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issues
in modern day.
This
type of pollution is more common in large cities. The one of the main
reason
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reasons
for
that is
large amount
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a large amount
of private cars. The
way
to reduce
this
pollution is public
transportation which
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transportation, which
is cheap and can carry many people at once. Even so most people will not give up their own cars because it’s faster and easier to travel and go to some destination.
Also
public
transportation
doesn’t have
good reputation
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a good reputation
among people. So how to encourage people to take public
transportation
over a private car?
First
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The first way
way
is to make public
transportation
more attractive for people by making it faster to travel inside or outside of the city. In one program I saw that to make buses travel faster in
city
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the city
cities
a city
they planned to build a different road for buses only which help them avoid traffic congestion.
This
way
people would choose bus
in
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during
rush hour.
Second
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The second way
way
is promoting
popularity
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the popularity
of public
transportation
.
This
could be done by showing people a famous person taking a public transport. The
last
way
is putting taxes on private car driver.
This
way
might be
effective but
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effective, but
personally I would suggest
use
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using
it only in extreme
situation but
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situation, but
in others I don’t think
this
is a good
way
.
Instead
of taking money from them we can increase benefits of taking public
transportation
as I mentioned before. In
conclusion if
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conclusion, if
we make public
transportation
more comfortable and convenient it should work to attract more commuters. Passengers are like customers and public
transportation
should satisfy
customers
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customers'
needs.

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