Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Many people believe that
advertisement
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an advertisement
is a powerful resource which tends to buy
stuffs
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stuff
without a
second
thought. Even in many countries it is commonly observed that many of the new inventions have been
popularizing
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popularized
with a blend of
promotionals
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Promotionals
professionals
.The new products are raising up each and every day in the market, in-order to familiarize the products, the seller
choose
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chooses
an advertisement is the only way which directly reaches to the customer's eyes and they found it's drastically
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
.Nowadays all the advertisements are quite helpful for the customers in terms of knowing about the
products
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product's
product
features and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
usages
also
many
peope
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
found these advertisements are useful before they own it. Many of the top companies believe that an advertisement is a vital key of the successful products.Even the common survey has been conducted by the private bodies about how advertisements are helpful for the business.
Firstly
,
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,
people getting impressed with the products based on the advertisements.
However many
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However, many
people
tempts
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tempt
to buy the products only the cause of digital advertisements despite of no use. Some sellers and agents know how to impress the customers with their irrevocable advertising knowledge and they make use of it. In other hands, there is
lot
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a lot
of people who
strongly believes
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strongly believe
that
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
would be helpful for enhancing their life and it's absolutely a myth.
Even lot
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An Even lot
Even lots
of firms had an
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
that we are fluttering the products only to give a quality life to consumers, but it's an awful statement.
Nowdays
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Now days
most of the products are highly dealing with
technology which
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technology, which
is quite useful
,
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,
parallely
being everywhere equidistant and not intersecting
parallel
it causes lots of harm to our health.
However
,
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,
advertisements are very much useful in gathering some
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
about the
produts
commodities offered for sale
products
and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
features. To be concluded people should use the products on if they needed and
aviod
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
using the products based on the advertisements. It will definitely decrease the
companies
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company's
economy level so all companies will start
manfacture
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to manufacture
manufacture
the products as per customers wish and it makes a good sense of business.
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