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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Some people suggest that the circumstances of a crime and the reason for committing it should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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In order to restrict ever increasing
crime
 rate a class of people ponder that
their
in or at that place
there
 has to be predefined
punishment
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punished
 based on
nature
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the nature
 of
crime whereas
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crime, whereas
 other opine that circumstances of
crime
 should be taken into account while deciding the
punishment
.
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Both views are discussed below before reaching to
valid conclusion
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a valid conclusion
valid conclusions
.
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.
 Fixing the
punishment
 by looking just at type of
crime
,
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,
 makes the decision making process very quick. As without wasting much time on investigating the
situation
 of
crime
,
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,
 it is actually the type of
crime
 which decides
punishment
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the punishment
.
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Furthermore
,
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,
by regularizing
punishment fear
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punishment, fear
 of
law
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the law
 is inculcated among all categories of criminals
that is
 small or brutal ones.
For example
,
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 Saudi Arab follows the policy of fixed sentencing. The law of country punishes the culprit of stealing an apple same as
one
 stealing a car
.
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As a result
 of
this
 Saudi Arab always tops the list of countries with low
crime
 rate
.
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.
 In admittedly
,
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,
 the
situation
 in which a
crime
 is committed plays a crucial role in judging the mindset of person committing
crime
.
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.
Thus
 judgment made after taking into consideration the circumstances often believe to be
fair
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a fair one
one
.
contrary
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Contrary
 to mandatory
punishment
 the idea of flexible
punishment
 help preventing the
situation
 triggered culprits from facing a furious
punishment
. Above all
,
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,
it is not judicial of imposing
same
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the same punishment
punishment
 to juvenile culprit as to
adult
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an adult
one
.
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 In my opinion
,
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,
flexible sentencing is more humane and righteous
,
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,
the circumstances while a felony occurs regulates the occurrence of
crime
.
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Thus
 the sentencing should never be based on type of
crime
.
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 To conclude
,
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,
although
 all criminals are to be treated equal in the eye of
law even
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law, even
 though the judgment process should be active
one
 (with
situation regulating intensity
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the situation regulating intensity
a situation regulating intensity
 of
punishment
) rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 passive
one
 (with
prefixed set
Suggestion
a prefixed set
 of rules deciding
punishment
)
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)
.
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