The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

The number of cars

are grown

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has been grown

since the time of

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

appearance.

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,

people

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person's

peoples'

peoples

belief that new form of vehicles must be encouraged and current

car

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ownership must be controlled by the international law. I believe that large amount of cars

in

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on

the roads causes more problem than

benefit

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a benefit

. Here is why:

Firstly

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, the

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. The

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

of cars on air has become one of the global

issue

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issues

.

For

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example incountries

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example, in countries

example in countries

with large number of population

such

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as China and India has

many amount

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a many amount

of

car

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owners

too and

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too, and

we can see the

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

of cars on air of the crowded cities of these cities

such

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as

Beigin

capital of the People's Republic of China in the Hebei province in northeastern China; 2nd largest Chinese city

Beijing

, Shanxay and

Kalkutta

one of the largest cities in India and one of the largest cities in the world; located in eastern India; suffers from poverty and overcrowding

Calcutta

.

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, the

car

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accidents. In recent years the percentage of deaths from

car

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accidents

has increased

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have increased

mostly in urban areas. To reduce

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this problems

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this problem

these problems

some companies

introdused

cause to come to know personally

introduced

introduce

new generation

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a new generation

the new generation

of

cars

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car

car's

electrocars

the branch of physics that deals with the emission and effects of electrons and with the use of electronic devices

electronics

,

this

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type of cars does not affect the air because it work on

electrisity

a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons

electricity

. But

this

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cars

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car

did not become popular and common. I think

this

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alternative

cars

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car

must be encouraged to commonly

use

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used

. Another way of reducing the problem is to control

car

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ownership and usage by international law.

Such

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law might decrease the percentage of deaths by

car

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accident. In conclusion, the benefit of saving time by

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

on

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in

the

car

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can cause more trouble than people may think. I saw many new alternative transport which could be more useful rather than current transportation and I believe that

this

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alternative transportations must become more commonly used in the world.