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Although

the

world

is moving toward globalization, there are some who are still concerned about the drawbacks of overseas

tourism

. While most of these beliefs have rooted in patriotism, there are some remedies for

this

issue, as we will discuss here. These opinions about the harmful effects of international

tourism

come from a history of rage and conflict between the nations, making them mostly exaggerated and revengeful. Iran,

for instance

, was raided by many foreign nations, including Mongols, Arabs, and some European countries which

has

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been tremendously afflicted

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vision.

Consequently

, some radical conservatives argue that every foreigner could be a threat to either country's culture or security. To say

in other words

, most of these hypotheses about the negative effects of

world

traveller

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are substantially due to insufficient understanding and inaccurate extrapolating the historical facts to current situations. Regarding potential

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, the media's role is of paramount importance, where they could disseminate truthfully and kind information beyond border limits, advertising the benefits of multinational

tourism

.

Furthermore

, digital media could foster their audience to communicate with travellers from around the

world

.

For instance

, Couchsurfing, a social network for

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the backpacker

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backpacker

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backpackers

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, has introduced a new way of travelling which involves exploring with

local

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locals

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and discovering cultural differences together. These initiatives and practices undoubtedly would depict a better image from

foreigner

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than what used to be in past. To conclude, while it seems that the brouhaha over the negative impact of global

tourism

has been mostly tied up with the misunderstanding of the new

world

, the media could mitigate

this

situation by

the

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spreading the word of love and respect between nations.