There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you because I have a trouble with your service.
Last
week, I used the Linking Words
bus
service of your company, but it has a lot of problems. I have been waiting for the Use synonyms
bus
for a long time at the Use synonyms
bus
station. the Use synonyms
bus
was about 30 minutes late, which does not match the time on the ticket.
Every morning, I have to go to work at 8.00. Use synonyms
this
makes me late for work and late for my appointment. I asked my neighbourhood about Linking Words
this
issue, they told me the same situation. Linking Words
Moreover
, they have informed me that the problem have been existing for two weeks.
As a user of your service, I would like to advise the company to take some steps in order to solve Linking Words
this
problem. Linking Words
Firstly
, you have to inspect the timetable of the Linking Words
bus
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, please make sure your driver starts work on time. Linking Words
Lastly
, the company must inform users immediately, if some problems happen.
I hope that you will take my problem and suggestion into consideration
Yours faithfully
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