You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation? explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work? say what kind of accommodation you would prefer?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current roommate’s behaviour.

Although

the room’s infrastructure is satisfactory, I am unable to use them when I need it the most. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. My roommate has a habit of using the washroom for longer hours in the mornings. So, I had to rush bathing in order to get ready soon for my morning sessions or should wake up early for using the washrooms before she uses it. Because of

this

, I had to reach my

classess

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classes

late and

thus

missing out

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lessons.

This

made my schedule hectic as I had to prepare both the missed out and the current lessons on my own which is extremely uncomfortable ad

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. Would you kindly transfer me to another

roon

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room

? I would be happy to live with a person who is cooperative and flexible in using the facilities. It would make me relaxed and concentrate on my exams as they are nearing. I request you to take action as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully,

Vyshu

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Vishu

Vishnu

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7 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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