You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation? explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work? say what kind of accommodation you would prefer?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current roommate’s behaviour.
Although
the room’s infrastructure is satisfactory, I am unable to use them when I need it the most. I hope you will consider my situation favourably. Let me explain my situation. My roommate has a habit of using the washroom for longer hours in the mornings. So, I had to rush bathing in order to get ready soon for my morning sessions or should wake up early for using the washrooms before she uses it. Because of
this
, I had to reach my
classess
Correct your spelling
classes

The word classess is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

late and
thus
missing out
important
Change preposition
on important

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
lessons.
This
made my schedule hectic as I had to prepare both the missed out and the current lessons on my own which is extremely uncomfortable ad
stressed
Replace the word
stressful

The word stressed doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
. Would you kindly transfer me to another
roon
Correct your spelling
room

The word roon is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

? I would be happy to live with a person who is cooperative and flexible in using the facilities. It would make me relaxed and concentrate on my exams as they are nearing. I request you to take action as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully,
Vyshu
Correct your spelling
Vishu
Vishnu

The word Vyshu is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

Submitted by vaishuramesh36 on

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next: