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Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

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Whether
money
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
 to be considered or not,
This
 topic
has becoming
Suggestion
is becoming
was becoming
 increasingly controversial. It is considered by some that giving hard
cash
money
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
gifts
 to adults is more
beneficail
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
 for them, while there are others who think that It has
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 own
drabacks
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
. I believe that distribute a
cash
money
 as
gift
 to youth generation is more convenient for
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 personal use. On the one hand, many think that
to
Suggestion
by
 giving them
cash
money
 is more useful for
the the
definite article
the
 youngsters.
In other words
, they can buy any
gift
 on
thier
of them or themselves
their
 own choices rather than others selected present.
Such
 as, one of the research found that 80 % of new
youn
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
yuan
ion
 generation people prefer to
having
Suggestion
have
 a
gift
 on
thier
of them or themselves
their
 own
prefrence
a strong liking
preferences
preference
. Therefor,
this
people
Suggestion
person
strongly hold
Suggestion
strongly holds
thier
of them or themselves
their
third
view
Suggestion
views
 that It is
more convenience
Suggestion
more convenient
 to give them
cash
money
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
gifts
.
On the other hand
, some people opposing that It could be dangerous to allocate
cash
money
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
gifts
 to
youngest
Suggestion
young
the young
younger
 people. The chief reason to believe them because they can utilize
this
cash
money
 for
worng
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 purpose. Take
a
Suggestion
an
 example, a young generation boys and girls always prefer to spend
thier
of them or themselves
their
money
 for entertainment.
Thus
, these people tend to
thier
of them or themselves
their
tire
 view that It is better to give them gifts rather than
cash
money
as
Suggestion
at
 present.
Finally
, in my opinion, despite of
thier
of them or themselves
their
 demerits, having a
cash
money
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
 is
more enjoyable experience
Suggestion
a more enjoyable experience
 for any adults. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, getting physical
cash
 as
gift
Suggestion
a gift
is give
Suggestion
gives
 more happiness for some youngsters, while others argued that could be
negative impact
Suggestion
a negative impact
 on
thier
of them or themselves
their
 mindset.
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