Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Whether
money
as
gift
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a gift
to be considered or not,
This
topic
has becoming
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is becoming
was becoming
increasingly controversial. It is considered by some that giving hard
cash
money
as
gift
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a gift
gifts
to adults is more
beneficail
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for them, while there are others who think that It has
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
own
drabacks
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
. I believe that distribute a
cash
money
as
gift
to youth generation is more convenient for
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
personal use. On the one hand, many think that
to
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by
giving them
cash
money
is more useful for
the the
definite article
the
youngsters.
In other words
, they can buy any
gift
on
thier
of them or themselves
their
own choices rather than others selected present.
Such
as, one of the research found that 80 % of new
youn
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
yuan
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generation people prefer to
having
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have
a
gift
on
thier
of them or themselves
their
own
prefrence
a strong liking
preferences
preference
. Therefor,
this
people
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person
strongly hold
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strongly holds
thier
of them or themselves
their
third
view
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views
that It is
more convenience
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more convenient
to give them
cash
money
as
gift
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a gift
gifts
.
On the other hand
, some people opposing that It could be dangerous to allocate
cash
money
as
gift
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a gift
gifts
to
youngest
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young
the young
younger
people. The chief reason to believe them because they can utilize
this
cash
money
for
worng
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
purpose. Take
a
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an
example, a young generation boys and girls always prefer to spend
thier
of them or themselves
their
money
for entertainment.
Thus
, these people tend to
thier
of them or themselves
their
tire
view that It is better to give them gifts rather than
cash
money
as
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at
present.
Finally
, in my opinion, despite of
thier
of them or themselves
their
demerits, having a
cash
money
as
gift
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a gift
is
more enjoyable experience
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a more enjoyable experience
for any adults. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, getting physical
cash
as
gift
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a gift
is give
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gives
more happiness for some youngsters, while others argued that could be
negative impact
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a negative impact
on
thier
of them or themselves
their
mindset.
Submitted by vaibhavna on

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