Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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The Social media is used mostly by people of younger age few years ago. Now it is used by any age group.

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increase

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popularity of social media concerns many people who believe that there is a risk of sharing information on these websites. I think it is worth to risk and it has many advantages. In

this

essay I will discuss the advantages of Social media and why advantages overshadow disadvantages. The

first

advantage is the social

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

are not used only by people but by companies too.

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help

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helps

customers to get information about

company

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a company

without visiting to the company’s building or contact them through the social media. There are even famous and well-developed companies which

shows

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show

that

this

social

medias

a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information

media

are secured and safe. The social media is good for

advertising especially for

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advertising, especially for

small companies and beginning companies. Another advantage is easy socializing with other people.

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is the main advantage of social media, it is

obviously

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obvious

why it is called social media. At the beginning the social media built

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

foundation by bringing people of same interest together. Now people can find their old friend or make a new friends on social media.

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in addition

Moreover

, they can even join the clubs of certain activities which interest them. In conclusion, the social media has many

advantages but we

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advantages, but we

should not forget about disadvantages and be caution when meeting new people or strangers and always check before sharing personal information.

Morever

in addition

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, it is up to people to be wise when using social media.

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