The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie
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charts
illustrate the outcomes of a survey about what makes people from several age categories feel glad
First
of all
both
age groups
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seems
to care about their work achievement the percentage
were
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was
up to 30
percent
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happiness
with approximately 20
percent
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the oldest think that having a financial security it is more important
However they
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However, they
both
agreed that around 22
percent
of
happiness it
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happiness, it
is due to doing their hobbies.
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,
the over 30
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groups
tend to prefer being with their family
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the under 30 choose
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to travel
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are
around 10
percent
more or less unknowing factors of
happiness
for
both
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according to the
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chart, we
can see that the causes of
happiness
in the two age groups are mostly alike
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,
both
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achievement, it
is the major reason of their
happiness
with over than 40
percent
for
both
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