In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Healthy diet is essential for good health and keep people fit. In few parts of the worlds many people are ill because having
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
much fast
food
. Is
this
necessary to tax these type of
food
to prevent health?.
This
essay disagrees about taxing
these
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these foods
food
because
Instead
of taxing the government can spread awareness about healthy diet and they can reduce prices of fresh fruits and vegetables. On one hand, Authorities could conduct awareness sessions and camp for their countrymen
,
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,
These
type
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types
of sessions, people would get
idea
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an idea
ideas
the idea
about the
food
which they could include in their diet and which foods they can reduce intake of
also
they will clear about the plethora of
healthier
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healthiest
foods available.
For example
:
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:
if people of particular region
eats
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eat
fast
food
lot.
this
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This
enlightenment could make them include good
food
and ignore junk items.
Moreover
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Moreover, initially
initially
there would be some resistance from
them but
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them, but
by
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with
proper guidance there might switch towards their choices.
On the other hand
,
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,
Government
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the Government
need
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needs
to decrease the cost of healthy, fresh items so that more and more people can able to purchase them easily.
For instance
: In my county most of the population comes under the poverty line. If prices of these
item
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items
reduces, they could
effort
be able to spare or give up
afford
these and keep themselves fit and fine.There were many news came
everyday
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every day
that people dying because lack of
food
so there more than having unhealthier
food
. In conclusion
,
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,
There are many other ways by which we can avoid consumption of
harmful product
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harmful products
. I Would like to highlight that, despite of taxing junk
food
government could take some other measurable steps to insure that the huge amount of crowd can have good
food
.

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