As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. why does this happen? How does this affect society?

In these days, many countries are becoming richer as these nations are reducing the
size
of
family
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the family
. While there are various reasons for
this
phenomenon and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will examine some causes, positive and negative effects on
society
in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are myriad reasons why develop nations prefer to small family
size
. The
first
and the foremost reason is
that is
education
. Women are more educated and they do concentrate on their work so they do not want to marry
soon
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soon, therefore,
therefore
, many
female
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females
will want delay family children.
Secondly
, the high cost of living. The majority of the people believe that if they have one or two
children
Accept comma addition
children, then
then
they provide better
education
, basic needs and medicines.
For instance
, a recent research has revealed that in 2016, in Bangladesh, 60% females who prefer to own work so they want to fewer having children.
Hence
, small family
size
is better for children’s development rather than large family.
Moreover
,
this
trend can impact on
society
in both positive and negative
way
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ways
. One positive effect is that the population rate will decline with
this
poverty will decline. Individual have more opportunity to obtain jobs and earn more money.
As a result
, parents can provide better
education
which will benefit to
society
. A negative impact is that there will be fewer young people in the workplace in the future.
Thus
, the economic growth will make less certain. In conclusion,
although
there are some reasons to reduce the family
size
like
education
and living cost, and
this
trend
have
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has
positive and negative impacts on
society
however
it has more positive effects as compared to
negative effects
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the negative effects
.
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