The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The pie chart illustrates the number of arrested and not arrested people
while
, the bar graph described the percentage of seven different causes to arrest
male
and females, over the period of five years between Fix the agreement mistake
males
the
1989 and 1994.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, males were arrested more than the
Correct article usage
apply
women
and the most common reason
for the arrest
is public drinking while
the least common reason
is not answering for both genders.
The pie chart reveals that 9% of the women
and 32% of men
were arrested in a given period of time. Where the bar graph described that the highest number of persons were taken into custody because they were drinking Correct article usage
the men
at
a public place. Drink and Change preposition
in
drive
is the Wrong verb form
driving
second
most common reason
for the arrest
. Where marginally less than 15% women
and slightly more Change preposition
of women
25
% male were taken under custody. No answering is the least Change preposition
than 25
reason
arrest
to arrest
in the given time span where only slightly below the 5% Change preposition
of male
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
little
above the Correct article usage
a little
women
were arrested. The rest all
of the four types (breach of order, Assault, theft and other reasons) percentage fluctuates between 12 per cent and 20 per cent.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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