Today more and more tourists are visiting places where the conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or The Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

An increasingly number of
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
, nowadays, are interested in travelling to areas having harsh conditions. Visiting
such
places
would undoubtedly
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would, undoubtedly
, bring a lifetime experience and recognition over social
media but
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media, but
this
has its own downsides. One evident benefit of having a vacation in harsh places is the unique and irreplaceable experiences that it brings, which implants a long-lasting memory in oneself.
In other words
, people are astonished to see surreal, breathtaking views that are rarely available elsewhere. Northern lights in Iceland,
for instance
, presents one
such
example, watching which, leaves people awe-struck. Exhilaration and adrenaline rush are another added benefit for the individuals. Another obvious advantage is the amount of appreciation and recognition sightseers get over social media, once the images of
such
places are shared over it
by
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with
them.
Consequently
,
this
results in an exponential rise in the number of followers over the social platform which helps in alleviating their confidence. There are,
on the other hand
, undeniable disadvantages of visiting places with
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
condition.
To begin
with, extreme weather condition of
such
places, namely, Antarctica or Amazon forests, makes it difficult for the tourist to have comfortable vacation.
Additionally
, most of these places have
scarcity
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a scarcity
of fundamental requisite for human
survival
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survival, such
such
as oxygen or drinkable water, which could result in
life-threatening situation
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life-threatening situations
a life-threatening situation
for
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
. To illustrate, people trekking in
Himalayan region
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the Himalayan region
sometime lose consciousness due to lack of oxygen and are advised to carry enough oxygen for the trip.
Furthermore
, most of these places are deprived of vegetation because of which tourists have minimal options available and,
therefore
, have to survive on limited supply. To conclude, while there are extra-ordinary experiences and thrill associated with visiting extreme-condition sites, it comes with a price of sacrificing luxury and comfort along with life-threatening circumstances.
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