Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? You should write at least 250 words. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a believe which says that our
personality
is destined at the time when we born and the
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
of our growing live on our
personality
is small. I believe that our experience, development and other factors of our growing life has more influence on our
personality
and in
this
essay I will explain why.
First
of all the characteristics that we born with can be easily changed during our growing life.
For example
, I grow with many friends and one of my friends
in particular
was very active and communicated with more people than I did but after years he became less sociable and quiet. There are many other examples which support
this
point.
Such
changes may occur due the many reasons. There are plenty of factors that could change our
personality
. We experience many changes in our
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
and the reason for them is
environment
Suggestion
the environment
an environment
in which we grow
or
of or belonging to us
our
people that we communicate with. Sometimes our cultural background can affect us too.
However
, our
personality
could be affected by our ancestors.
For instance
, we gain some of our
personality
Suggestion
personalities
treats from our parents or
grandparents
Suggestion
grandparents'
same way as we gain our appearance and looks from them.
Nevertheless
,
this
influence does not affect us more than any other factor In conclusion, I should say that all the factors could affect us in the same way and it is hard to call one factor more
influencal
having or exercising influence or power
influential
. But it
is not destined
Suggestion
was not destined
at the time we born because during the our
life it
Accept comma addition
life, it
can change whether we want it or not.
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