National costume or traditional wears of a particular country are an important part of the culture of that country, but with globalisation of cultures and other exchanges taking place, now they seem to be losing importance. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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In recent days, people

are giving

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have given

so much importance to their clothing sense as they believing in cloth make a huge effect on their personal, social and professional life.

In addition

, moving towards globalization, people are adopting

new trend

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new trends

a new trend

wears

a late time of life

years

wars

from different countries into their routine lifestyle. Some people argue that

this

is a very critical situation for our own heritage for classical cloths and one should not forget own culture’s part. I totally disagree with their statement. Generally, a person gets

differentiate

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differentiated

and get identified for their nationality by their skin, clothes, language, and food. In which, the cloth is playing an important role.

Although

traditional cloths provide respect to one’s nationality, it makes people to discomfort to have these clothes all over time.

For example

, in India, wearing Shervani for men and Sari for women in marriage or in

Hindu festival

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a Hindu festival

gives them the opportunity to get respect and makes them connected with social but having

same suite whole day

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the same suite whole day

at work unable them to work efficiently.

Moreover

, here in India, some culture has

special kind

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a special kind

the special kind

special kinds

of cloths like wearing a special type of cap in Maharastra,

India which

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India, which

make

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makes

them proud

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their religion or feel superior in their tradition. It may happen that people from other culture could not understand it

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inside

out of India and make fun of them while

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to a different country. In

this

case, they might feel depressed while pursuing own tradition characteristics. It is

there for

(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result

therefore

therefor

necessary to understand different culture with their clothing sense to get mixed up in their society. To conclude, I must say our

traditional

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traditions

are well known and people are always keeping them alive in different counties and in our own country

too but

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too, but

sticking same traditional clothes

makes

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make

people inconvenient in the day to day life.

Fri Apr 12 2019

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National costume or traditional wears of a particular country are an important part of the culture of that country, but with globalisation of cultures and other exchanges taking place, now they seem to be losing importance. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Private car ownership has grown dramatically in recent years. This has led to a rise in traffic congestion. What could governments and individuals do to reduce congestion?