when choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
argued that the
salary
plays the most important role in view of job seekers. While I accept that
this
may suit many people, I believe that others would consider different elements as the key reasons for
pursuiting
a sign posted in a public place as an advertisement
posting
positing
their jobs.
On the other hand
, there are many reasons why the high salaries are the ideal condition for job’s seekers.
Firstly
, they can provide upper, high life conditions as
their
people in general
they
desire. Because a good
salary
is not only support
Suggestion
is not only supported
them to meet our basic needs but
also
give them an opportunity to afford luxury holidays, buy modern applications
,
Accept space
,
therefore
they can enhance the quantity of life.
Secondly
, jobs with appealing salaries are always associated with attractive awarding perk.
This
perk will help them raise their motivation for work and gain more profit.
On the other hand
, there are people who make their career decision based on other conditions.
Such
as whether it is suitable between the work and their individual human being including their characters, lifestyles or their expectation for work.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, the contribution of
this
career
for
Suggestion
of
the society is
also
an important
elements
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element
for them to take into account. If the jobs break the law of the country and are considered
harful
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
for the civilized society, it is hardly
acceptant
for them to do these jobs.
For instance
, selling heroines or human organs is illegal and just a little proportion of people taking part in even thought it
is
Suggestion
was
among the jobs with
highest salaries
Suggestion
the highest salaries
. It is true that some people decide
their
people in general
they
job depending on the
salary
but I
also
think that there are people who choose their
job
Suggestion
jobs
with others requirements apart from
salary
.
Submitted by Thanh on

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