Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

Plastic
bags have become one the major contributor to pollution of
land
and sea. Some people believe it should be banned and I totally agree with
this
opinion as it is indeed necessary to save
world
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the world
. There are numerous problems associated with
plastic
bags.
Firstly
, it takes up to 100 years for some
plastic
bags to decompose and some are not even decomposed after 100 years.
Consequently
, all
plastic
bags end up in water and
land
as a garbage and waste.
Recent study
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A recent study
Recent studies
by
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of
Sweden university students shows that a time in
near future
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the near future
will come when we have not enough space on
land
to dump our waste.
Thus
, it is our responsibility to avoid
plastic
bags and go for alternative sources
such
as paper bag to avoid
this
situation. Government needs to step forward and put a ban on
plastic
shopping bags.
Plastic
bags
not
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don't also pollute
doesn't also pollute
aren't also polluting
also
pollute
land but
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land, but
also
water as well and because of these bags there are many species endangered in water. Recently, I watched one documentary which shows in Atlantic Ocean many turtles got killed because
plastic
bag stuck
into
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in
their throat. Many developed countries
such
as Sweden, Norway already take steps and ban
plastic
bags completely from all over
country
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the country
. Other countries should follow these countries good step towards
better future
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a better future
which not only benefit our
children but
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children, but
also
animals which are threatened2 because of
plastic
bags. To conclude, I am strongly in favour of banning
plastic
shopping bags because of
dangers
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the dangers
it poses on
environment
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the environment
and our future.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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