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Some people say that failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

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Needless to say, success and
failure
 is a part of people's life. Some people believe that,
this
 is because they do not have aspirations up to the mark. I totally disagree with the notion. The parameters which are really responsible for that, is, lack of
interest
 and wrong selection of goals. One of the most significant reasons of
failure
 in life is lack of
interest
. Nowadays, most of the businesses are demanding focused attention of their workers, and employees
failed time
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failed, time
 to time to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 that need. It is believed that most of the businesses are
failed
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failing
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
 of their
workers
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workers'
interest
 which is ultimately a
failure
 for people who are working for them. Sometimes, an appropriate selection of goal
is
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is also playing
has also played
also plays
also
 play a vital role in success and
failure
. Presently, some people are not capable enough to take right decisions in to choose a suitable profession which will suite their work capabilities and skill set. They
are easily attracting
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easily attract
have easily attracted
 towards the career which looks them more
rewardable
easily deciphered
readable
 and effortless, due to the fact that, they are facing
failure
 relentless. To illustrate that, a study conducted by the University of London shows that 90% of people are unsuccessful because of their
inacurate
not exact
inaccurate
 decisions towards their professional career. In conclusion, despite the fact that, desires of people are not strong enough, but, there are other factors which are accountable for
failure
 in life
such
 as lack of
interest
 and wrong selection of goals.
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