Some people think that teenagers should be required to do community service in their free time as this would benefit both the individual teenagers and their society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The things people do and learn during their early years are one of the factors that shapes their characters.That's why teenagers free time must be planned carefully in order to be used

effeciently

with efficiency; in an efficient manner

efficiently

for their benefit and the benefit of the society. In my opinion, teenagers should be required to participate in community services for a specific number of hours during their summer or winter holidays and the application of

this

concept took place in some countries as they demand a specific hours of service

from

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for

teenagers for them to graduate from

highschool

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high school

and that showed a remarkable results in teenagers overall behaviour. There are several community services through which teenagers can participate

for example

, they can help in geriatric homes as that will present a good chance for teenagers to learn from their elders and in return they can keep them company and spend some time with them.

Moreover

, teenagers can be asked to help in cleaning their towns and that should teach them to be humble and organised and will leave a clean streets for the society.

Furthermore

, they can help younger orphan and less

fourtinate

having unexpected good fortune

fortunate

children by helping them in their studies, paying them visits and playing with

them which

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them, which

helps them to appreciate their

plessings

the formal act of approving

blessings

and be more compassionate, giving and caring towards others. In conclusion, having teenagers doing community service is very important for the teenagers and for the society as it

help

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helps

them to grow

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

more humble, generous,

compassionat

showing or having compassion

compassionate

competent

and productive individuals.

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Some people think that teenagers should be required to do community service in their free time as this would benefit both the individual teenagers and their society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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