Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It
has becoming
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is becoming
has become
popular to control the children by some
short
a category of things distinguished by some common characteristic or quality
sort
of punishment. Physical penalty is the best way to control children behaviour.
This
essay will argue why smacking children is entirely necessary to teach them manners despite the parent’s emotion. Parents
have always been trying
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have always tried
to establish a best practice to curbing their children. They are
justifiable
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justifiably
worried about If their children
obay
be obedient to
obey
the rules in school or somewhere else that could be lead them on
wrong path
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the wrong path
of
future
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the future
. Indeed, there have been some instances of children those
mother
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mothers
and father does not show them
right way
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the right way
or without any kind of punishing, which could potentially take them begin to be irresponsible person. These few examples bolstered existing fears in parents that penalizing
has becoming
Suggestion
is becoming
has become
completely necessity
Suggestion
a completely necessity
to bring children on
correct form
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the correct form
of discipline. Despite some parents getting more emotional while giving
penalty
Suggestion
a penalty
penalties
to their children,
instead
of
this
, those parents who
are begin
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are beginning
are begun
to be draconian against their
children
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children's
child's
mistakes that could be beneficial to make them smarter and intelligent.
Such
as by doing regular school assignments on timely eventually teach them time management manners.
Therefore
, acceptable hitting
to
being one more than one
two
children merely
option
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an option
to understand the importance of the self-behaviour. In conclusion,
this
essay argued that people who are less develop the method of punishment for their children, ultimately unable to teach them
disciplinary
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discipline
.
in
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In
my opinion, parents should apply a suitable punishment to their children to grow well.

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