More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.Some people say that price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Due to severe changes in our lifestyle
as a result
of modernization, we are now facing mixed results of the same.It is often argued by some people that as obesity has now become
a
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an
issue of concern,
hike
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the hike
in prices of
food
containing high fat content will resolve the problem.I strongly agree with
this
idealogy
an orientation that characterizes the thinking of a group or nation
ideology
since it will help in reducing
food
consumption of
such
type of dishes.
Firstly
, due to
change
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changes
in eating habits of people especially young ones
,
Accept space
,
liking for cuisines containing cheese content or highly saturated foods has increased now a days.People prefer to have fried foods from
store
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the store
as it provides them contentment in comparison to
home made
made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
food
.These
highy
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
highly
saturated foods
gradually deteriorates
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gradually deteriorate
your health as they
dont
do not
don't
have any nutritional value.
Also
, it leads to health problems like heart diseases, stomach issues and the most common obesity, which
further
leads you to become victim of many diseases. So if government institutions impose heavy taxes on
such
products, it will definitely help in refraining people from consuming it frequently, as due to increased prices it will hamper their monthly budget.
For example
, Children will now prefer to eat at their residing places rather than going out at
food
outlets
,
Accept space
,
due to financial constraints. To conclude with, rise in prices of highly saturated
food
items will lead to
healthy society
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a healthy society
healthy societies
.As it is rightly said, healthy
food
leads to
healthy mind
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a healthy mind
healthy minds
.
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