As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities, do you agree or disagree?

Businesses are now making the most property among all economic elements. With their huge financial resources, they are supposed to do public responsibilities. In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
point of view. In general, most companies, together with their
business
, they have been passively contributed to social budgets by taxes. The more wealth they make, the more money
is paid
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pays
for government. Authorities will conduct
this
fund for many supports in key fields, including education, health care and social activities. Another important role of enterprises is the insurance for job opportunities. If their
business
can be expanded and sustainable, yet unemployment is not a terrible threat
for
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of
to
economic and community.
On the other hand
, companies- along with their production- should responsible to negative impacts they have been making. One of
biggest
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the biggest
issue is environmental degradation, which is directly
influent
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
influence
to community health. By proper investment
on
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in
waste management processes, serious effects
such
as global warming, air and water pollution,
Accept space
could be in controlled.
In addition
, they should take more efforts on any activities related in environment improvement (
eg
: environment funding, environment research sponsor,…)
Last
but not least, in moral judgement, sharing is necessary to help those
are who less
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who are less
fortunate, since they have the money to do so.
Also
, it will bring a positive effect to their
business
.
For example
, some big corporations like Unilever, Vinamilk have enhanced their public image through charity or providing scholarships,… In conclusion, beside making huge economic benefit, I would argue that companies should spend more on social responsibilities- which is
essential part
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an essential part
for
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of
business
and social sustainable development.
Submitted by Thanh on

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