Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative ?

Nowadays, the internet has
gain
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gained
a lot of attention in terms of searching for
information
by most of them
Instead
of books. As there are plenty of resources to
gain
information
through a browser.
However
, online
information
sometime is not that legitimate. But, books are genuine. One must respect books, as the author puts his whole life experience. I think it is a positive move, but at the same
time it
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time, it
completely depends upon the kind of
information
looking
tell anonymously
leaking
. It is very comfortable to look for something to
gain
knowledge and
also
from various sources. Online
information
gets updated at regular interval, it does not take much
time
to look for the
information
which we are looking for and it is
fascination
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fascinating
to know the reaction of a other members, as it is a global platform.
Such
as we you are reading a blog which it get updated on a regular basis, at the same
time
we
also
get to know the feedback of other reader around the world.
However
, there is no guarantee that all
information
on the internet is true, you can get into trouble by reading wrong. But, Books are a complete life experience of an author.
Such
as, if you are following a technical blog, which consist of latest gadget
information
, but there are hidden truth which blogger
don’t know
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doesn’t know
as blogger didn’t
used
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use
that gadget completely. So there is a small fear of
gain
false
information
. To conclude, though it is a positive move to get
information
from various
source
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sources
on the
internet but
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internet, but
at the same
time
we cannot completely trust
such
information
, I believe.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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