It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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More than 40 years ago, Lance Armstrong had the

first

human steps on a moon surface.

Although

some people consider that

money

spend on

space

research

is useless, I still believe

this

is a positive development of the world Those the non-supported

space

research

Suggestion

researchers

believe that

this

money

should be used

Suggestion

for

some vital public services like health service, road or education. It’s clear to see that these public services have a direct effect on almost citizen in the country.

For example

, many governments don’t spend enough

money

on building the hospital, so poor people of

this

country can’t receive a standard service for their health.

Similarly

, a lot of rural children can’t go to study as a normal student because of the lack of the school situation. There is no doubt that if the government ignore some basic public service to invest

money

for

space

research

, many criticisms will have happened.

On the other hand

this

is not mean

Suggestion

does not mean

doesn't mean

is not meant

has not meant

that

space

research

is a waste of

money

. We have to find out the alternative planet for Earth in the near future and

space

research

is the best solution. There are many reasons to do

this

mission.

Firstly

, a growing population

has been becoming

Suggestion

has become

a global problem. Many developing countries must against the overpopulation without any effective solution. It

also

causes the uncontrollable immigration situation in developed countries. Not only that, nowadays, almost European countries fall to a lack of energy problem.

As a result

, many citizens in France, Germany...

will

Suggestion

Will

suffer a cold winter without gas or coal to

warming

Suggestion

warm

Therefore

, we have to discover an alternative planet as soon as possible. In conclusion, it is evident that some achievements in

space

research

are big steps of mankind. If the governments can invest

money

to explore new planets in the right way, we can continue to enjoy the benefits that

this

research

offers

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