It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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More than 40 years ago, Lance Armstrong had the

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human steps on a moon surface.

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some people consider that

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spend on

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is useless, I still believe

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is a positive development of the world Those the non-supported

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researchers

believe that

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should be used

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some vital public services like health service, road or education. It’s clear to see that these public services have a direct effect on almost citizen in the country.

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, many governments don’t spend enough

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on building the hospital, so poor people of

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country can’t receive a standard service for their health.

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, a lot of rural children can’t go to study as a normal student because of the lack of the school situation. There is no doubt that if the government ignore some basic public service to invest

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for

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, many criticisms will have happened.

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is a waste of

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. We have to find out the alternative planet for Earth in the near future and

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is the best solution. There are many reasons to do

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mission.

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, a growing population

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has become

a global problem. Many developing countries must against the overpopulation without any effective solution. It

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causes the uncontrollable immigration situation in developed countries. Not only that, nowadays, almost European countries fall to a lack of energy problem.

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, many citizens in France, Germany...

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suffer a cold winter without gas or coal to

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warm

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, we have to discover an alternative planet as soon as possible. In conclusion, it is evident that some achievements in

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are big steps of mankind. If the governments can invest

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to explore new planets in the right way, we can continue to enjoy the benefits that

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It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Sending spacecraft and astronauts into space is very expensive. It would be better for governments to use the money spent on space exploration to improve the quality of life on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more?

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