It has been more than 40 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space research is a waste of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

More than 40 years ago, Lance Armstrong had the
first
human steps on a moon surface.
Although
some people consider that
money
spend on
space
research
is useless, I still believe
this
is a positive development of the world Those the non-supported
space
research
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researchers
believe that
this
money
should be used
on
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for
some vital public services like health service, road or education. It’s clear to see that these public services have a direct effect on almost citizen in the country.
For example
, many governments don’t spend enough
money
on building the hospital, so poor people of
this
country can’t receive a standard service for their health.
Similarly
, a lot of rural children can’t go to study as a normal student because of the lack of the school situation. There is no doubt that if the government ignore some basic public service to invest
money
for
space
research
, many criticisms will have happened.
On the other hand
,
this
is not mean
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does not mean
doesn't mean
is not meant
has not meant
that
space
research
is a waste of
money
. We have to find out the alternative planet for Earth in the near future and
space
research
is the best solution. There are many reasons to do
this
mission.
Firstly
, a growing population
has been becoming
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has become
a global problem. Many developing countries must against the overpopulation without any effective solution. It
also
causes the uncontrollable immigration situation in developed countries. Not only that, nowadays, almost European countries fall to a lack of energy problem.
As a result
, many citizens in France, Germany...
will
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Will
suffer a cold winter without gas or coal to
warming
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warm
.
Therefore
, we have to discover an alternative planet as soon as possible. In conclusion, it is evident that some achievements in
space
research
are big steps of mankind. If the governments can invest
money
to explore new planets in the right way, we can continue to enjoy the benefits that
this
research
offers
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