Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?

It is true that many aspects of
culture
are becoming increasingly similar throughout the world.
Although
this
trend has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks On the one hand, the globalisation of fashion, brands, eating habits and other areas of
culture
has some benefits.
Firstly
,
this
trend makes the relationship between many countries become better so that there is no war
occur
Suggestion
occurring
all over the world.
For example
,
instead
of showing the power of army of each nation, organizing a competition about sports, fashions
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
so on could be an optimal way to solve the
aruguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
arrangement
arguments
between governments.
Secondly
, a decrease of differences in term of fashions, TV channels and
etc
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
between countries brings a positive impact on
international market place
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the international market place
.
For instance
, producers in a foreign
country
can waste less money to investigate the habit of domestic market if they want to invest in some countries because there is an equal point in their
country
compared with other
country
.
On the other hand
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that the disadvantages of cultural globalisation are even more significant.
Furthermore
, the particular points in term of brands, eating habits and so on of each
country
are the special features of their
culture
as well as the results of thousand year building and we should protect them. As an example, using
chopstick
Suggestion
chopsticks
a chopstick
in most of South East Asian countries play a crucial role in their eating habits while folks, spoons are the main tools in meals of European countries. What is more, it is undeniable that there is less motivation to explore our world if our planet become similar. A case in point, traditional clothes
are
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is
special features in
culture
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the culture
of many nations and it attracts a lot of scientists who come to discover the mysterious
culture
of those countries. In conclusion, it seems to me that the drawbacks of globalisation, in terms of cultural habits
such
as the clothes we wear or the foods we eat, do outweigh the benefits.
Submitted by lelecuonghpv on

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