Some people prefer to shop for food in super market other people prefer to their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience .

Now a
days
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day
many
super markets
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarkets
have started to
deliever
bring to a destination, make a delivery
deliver
delivery
food
online at home. Many people choose to buy online while others are
still believe
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still, believe
still believed
still believed believed
to shop traditionally by visiting at a place.
This
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will discuss why online shopping of grocery is advantageous but why traditional shopping shall be
preferential
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preferred
. Many people find online shopping more
convinient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
due to their
hactic
marked by intense agitation or emotion
hectic
time
schedule. Online shopping of the
food
is blessings for women
,
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,
as they find
difficulty
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difficult
to spare a
time
for shopping from their daily tight working schedule. It is very beneficial because as one can purchase any
food
items
in
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with
a single click as their door step and that too in a few
minuts
a written account of what transpired at a meeting
minutes
minuets
months
.
For instance
,
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,
in
India Big basket
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an India Big basket
is one of the largest online
super market
a large self-service grocery store selling groceries and dairy products and household goods
supermarket
and it provides
grocessary
in just
turnaround period
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a turnaround period
the turnaround period
of 2 hours.
Thus
online shopping of grocery is very useful for busy people as it saves
time
and energy both.
However
online purchase of
food
items is not always
preferrable
more desirable than another
preferable
. In fact, working women should
also
take a
time
in
weekend
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the weekend
a weekend
to go for a traditional shopping. Reason
there of
of or concerning this or that
thereof
is
,
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,
we have lots of choices to purchase our desired
friuts
the ripened reproductive body of a seed plant
fruits
and vegetables of precise size, quantity and quality in
supermarket
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the supermarket
supermarkets
a supermarket
. Let me explain it by two examples. Suppose if
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to buy some rice
,
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,
oats or
breads
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breads, then
then
I will get multiple brands of different companies which I might be not
get
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getting
all in online shopping.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
If I want to buy mangos
then
there are multiple types of mangos with different size and taste available in
market
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the market
.
Thus
,
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,
traditional shopping is
very pleasurable experience
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a very pleasurable experience
and one should go for traditional shopping of
food
items if
time
is not a limiting factor. Due to busy work schedule of people and increased use of technology
,
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,
traditional shopping is challenged.
This
essay discussed why online shopping is
efficient but
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efficient, but
why traditional shopping is ultimately superior. In my opinion
,
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,
visiting supermarket is more advantageous and joyful as compared to online
food
shopping.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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