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The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Immediate families are capable of relocating overseas because of how small they are. I believe their offspring can greatly benefit from
this
 academically and culturally. As well as, I think the benefits of
this
 overshadow the drawbacks. The
depature
the act of departing
departure
 of an entire household from their home town
to
Suggestion
in
 another country has great positives for their children.
Firstly
, people usually move out because they have found better work
opporutnities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 abroad.
Therefore
, their destination country is usually more developed educationally. For
this
 reason, their children may have greater chances to
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
enrolled
 in better universities in order to obtain a good university degree.
For example
, my family moved to Qatar from Sudan when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 was 14, since
then
, I enrolled
in
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at
 Georgetown University, a world known institution with branches in America and the
Uk
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UK
.
This
opporutnity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
 has paved the way for a very successful career. Overall,
this
 is just one of the many benefits moving brings. Despite the
neglible
so small as to be meaningless; insignificant
negligible
 disadvantage moving brings,
such
 as, being away from home and family and friends, it is more advantageous in many ways.
To begin
 with, youngsters get to experience new cultures, in turn, learn new languages. Which may help them in their future jobs,
for instance
,
this
 is because
billingual
using or knowing two languages
bilingual
 employees are preferred in the workforce.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, moving is not temporary, these children can eventually move back to their home towns, fully equipped with the tools, experience and education they obtained from living abroad. Undoubtedly, relocating abroad is seen as a positive development. In conclusion, the ease of which immediate families can move globally, has positively facilitated the new generation in numerous ways.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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