In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples not having children?

In developed nations like Europe and America, there is an emerging trend of husbands and wives reluctancy to conceive children and continue their lineage.
This
has brought about many benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in
this
essay, followed by a reasoned conclusion. There are numerous positives associated with couples
relucatance
(physics) opposition to magnetic flux (analogous to electric resistance)
reluctance
to give birth.
To begin
with, the
world
has become difficult to live in,
this
is in the sense that everything
arround
in the area or vicinity
around
us has become more expensive and inaccessible.
Therefore
, it is
diffcult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
to
fund
come upon, as if by accident; meet with
find
and bring a baby into
this
world
, as they are very demanding. Alternatively, couples can spend
this
money developing themselves and direct it
into
Suggestion
in
other
ways
Accept comma addition
ways, such
such
as, spending on their extended families or charities.
In addition
to
this
, in a more
monetory
relating to or involving money
monetary
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
world
, young adults can focus on succeeding in and furthering their careers.
For example
, my cousin Anna, has been married for 12 years, and does not have any children, both her and her husband have thrived in their jobs and she is now the youngest billionaire in the
world
. Despite the many benefits, there are
also
grave consequences.
Firstly
, those that do not have any children feel like they
live
go away from a place
leave
empty,
unfulfilling
lives, especially mothers.
This
is because women are psychologically constructed to be very maternal and crave kids at a certain age.
Consequently
,
this
may lead to depression.
For instance
, psychiatry studies have proven that, 40% of married women over the age of 30 are clinically depressed, the proportion that
do not have
Suggestion
does not have
any kids are 88%.
This
exhibits a very strong correlation between the lack of offspring and depression.
Secondly
, if
every one
all people
everyone
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
to stop having kids, the population on earth will begin to regress. Undoubtedly,
this
is a very negative repercussion, as it may lead to the extinction of the human race. In
conclusion there
Accept comma addition
conclusion, there
are many pros and cons to the growing number of couples refusing to give birth.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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