a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch

Dear Monica , I hope
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letter finds you in pink of your health and I am writing
this
letter to say my inconvenience to attend the party that you arranged on
next
Monday . I know that
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it will be a crucial day because you decided to leave
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our company . Unfortunately , due to some personal circumstances , I am unable to attend the party . As you know that, for the past few months I am suffered
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some health issues and my doctor suggest me
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treatment for
one week
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duration . It includes a small surgery . so , I need to admit
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this
Sunday and the treatment ends
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next
Sunday . I still remember that
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we are
atarted
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started
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on the same day and we shared a lot of beautiful moments together . You are my good friend forever . I enjoyed moments with you especially at
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of our
last
holiday trip to
mysoor
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Mysore
your
. I feel very sad and lonely because of your absence. please don't
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with my absence
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your party and I will
definitly
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come to your home after treatment .
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would like to keep the relationship with you because you are my best friend . I will call you after
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returned from
hospital
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. I look forward to receiving your
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. Yours lovingly , Liya
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