a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch

#colleague #work #goodbye #party #reason #memories #touch

Dear Monica , I hope

this

letter finds you in pink of your health and I am writing

this

letter to say my inconvenience to attend the party that you arranged on

Monday . I know that

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it will be a crucial day because you decided to leave

from

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our company . Unfortunately , due to some personal circumstances , I am unable to attend the party . As you know that, for the past few months I am suffered

with

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some health issues and my doctor suggest me

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treatment for

one week

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duration . It includes a small surgery . so , I need to admit

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this

Sunday and the treatment ends

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Sunday . I still remember that

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we are

atarted

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started

our

career

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on the same day and we shared a lot of beautiful moments together . You are my good friend forever . I enjoyed moments with you especially at

time

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of our

last

holiday trip to

mysoor

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Mysore

your

. I feel very sad and lonely because of your absence. please don't

irate

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with my absence

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your party and I will

definitly

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come to your home after treatment .

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would like to keep the relationship with you because you are my best friend . I will call you after

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returned from

hospital

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. I look forward to receiving your

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. Yours lovingly , Liya

Submitted by Liya on Thu Apr 18 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

234 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased •Explain why you are not happy with the purchase • Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation

Some company sponsors sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think that it is good, while others think there are disavantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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