Some people believe that purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members for society .other say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. discuss both views and give your own opinion

In order to, few individuals think that motive of
study
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the study
is to develop human to be convenient for society while
other
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others
believe that reason of
education
is to reach private goals. I would discuss both views in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
To begin
with
,
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,
there are myriad reasons why I agree with the given statement
.
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The
first
and the
proponent
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proponent's
view is that
education
plays major role in the growth and progress of civilization.
it
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It
is one of the key components it can make or break culture's if
citizen
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a citizen
of humanity are
educated they
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educated, they
can provide significant contributions in the fields of arts
,
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,
science
,
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,
technology and others.
moreover if
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Moreover, if
Moreover if
more and more mankind
are educated they
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is educated, they
is educated they
should be able to help the community by participating in social projects and as well as they encourage
teenager
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teenagers
the teenager
a teenager
for study.
In
addition
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addition, education
education
is important for mankind and as well as for country development. Contrary above to the statement schooling is predominant for our life.
for
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For
successful career study
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the successful career, study
the successful career study
is most important.
Thus
well informed people can easily find good job opportunities and earn money to full fill their personal things
.
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.
if
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If
they highly
educated good
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educated, good
companies want to hire them
.
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.
however
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However
,
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,
education
helps to become good
,
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,
students
,
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,
parents
,
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,
doctors and honest citizen of
nation
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the nation
a nation
. Contact with
educate
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educating
person who
have
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has
great knowledge through conversation we
expends
extend in one or more directions
expands
our understanding. In the conclusion
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,
both
statement
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statements
have their own merit
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.
on
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On
balance
,
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, however, education
however
education
is
play
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playing
vital role
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a vital role
in life
also
in society
.
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.
education
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Education
should be
complusory
required by rule
compulsory
for everyone
.
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.
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